Story #2: THE WRONG TURN



The Wrong Turn

A man realizes that his Uber driver is not who he seems


Thomas’s phone had picked the worst time to die on him.

Standing outside his office in the pouring rain with nothing but a flimsy umbrella as protection, he cursed his luck that everyone in the office used Apple chargers, while he was stuck with an Android.
So he couldn’t call an Uber, and the bus was late. Either that, or it just wasn’t coming. It was just his luck.


Just when he was about to start praying to God for a miracle, a white Toyota rolled to a stop in front of him.

The window slowly came down, and the silver-haired man in the driver’s seat said, “Tom?”

No one called him Tom, except for his grandmother, and she was dead. So this Uber had to have been for another man; a man who wasn’t there yet.

Thomas didn’t have to think twice. “Yes,” he said quickly, before the real Tom showed up. “I’m Tom.”

He heard the sweet sound of the backseat door unlocking, and he closed his umbrella, and gratefully opened the door to slide in.

The leather seat made a squeaky sound when he moved, but the car was nice and toasty.

“Thank you so much,” Thomas heard himself say, leaning back with a sigh. “I was getting soaked out there.”

The man didn’t reply.

Thomas cleared his throat. “Please cancel whatever route you’ve got programmed in there. I’ve changed my mind.” The lie easily fell from his lips. “I’d like to be dropped off at the apartment complex opposite the mall in Silver Lakes. Do you know it?”

Of course he knew it. Who didn’t know where the mall was? But Thomas had to make sure.

When the driver nodded slightly, Thomas relaxed again, closing his eyes.



His head was full of thoughts about his girlfriend, Rachel, and how mad she would be that he was late for dinner. She’d no doubt gone all out for him today, but he really didn’t feel like celebrating. Thirty might’ve been a big deal for everyone else, but it was also the age at which his father had lost his battle with cancer. Thomas dreaded going for a check-up, but he’d done it a week before. The results were supposed to be out, but he was too afraid to answer the doctor’s call.

The sharp turn the driver took made his eyes snap open.

“Hey, bud,” he said, “you’re going the wrong way.”

The man was either ignoring him, or just couldn’t hear him.

“Bud,” Thomas repeated, leaning forward to tap the man on his shoulder, “you’re going the wrong way.”

Thomas’s heart started pounding erratically when he was ignored once more. He looked out the window, not recognizing the street. The roads weren’t busy, like they would’ve been in the daytime. No, it was after ten on a Thursday night, and most adults were home with their loved ones preparing for another workday.

Damn it, Thomas thought to himself. Even if he rolled the window down and screamed for help, who would hear him? The streetlights?

“Stop the car!” he shouted at the driver, who paid him no mind. “I said, stop the car right now!”

Instead, the driver took another turn, and that was when Thomas lost it. The driver was either a human trafficker, or wanted to kidnap him for a ransom—after all, Rachel’s family was incredibly wealthy. This was his own stupid fault. Get into a car with a stranger who somehow knew a variation of his name? He’d obviously been targeted.

“Stop the car, damn it!” Thomas tried to get through to the man once again, and when that didn’t work, he did a stupid and dangerous thing.

He boxed the man’s ear.

“Are you crazy?” the man shouted, turning to glare at him over his shoulder.

“Oh, now you talk! Let me out of here. Now!”     
 
The car continued to move, and Thomas suddenly saw red. A crowbar was winking at him from beside his left foot, and he reached for it. It was stupid, but he was angry. Angry that he’d never even considered the possibility that his life could be in danger from accepting this ride.

What followed was a blur to Thomas.

He lashed out, as quick as a viper. There was blood. A lot of it. And then the man slumped forward, his foot heavy on the gas.



This is it, Thomas thought. This is where I die.

He closed his eyes and braced himself. The car skidded slightly, and when the impact came, Thomas’s head connected with the headrest in front of him, making his ears ring.

But the car had stopped.

Thomas stumbled out of the car, his head pounding. There was blood trickling into his eye from a cut on his temple, making his vision blurry. He didn’t care. Staggering away from the car, he called out for help.

“Thomas?”

He knew that voice.

His eyes widened. “Sam?”

What was his girlfriend’s brother doing out here?

“Jesus, did you get mugged?” Sam wanted to know, tossing his cigarette butt away. He put a hand on Thomas and looking at him. His eyes drifted over Thomas’s shoulder, at the car wreck. “Jesus. No wonder you were late. Is the driver okay?”

“Late?” Thomas sputtered.

Sam let out a sigh. “Rachel organized a surprise birthday bash for you. Everyone’s been waiting in there for an hour.” He jerked his thumb behind them, at the tall, red-brick building that was the Silver Lakes Convention Centre. “The Uber driver she sent to get you probably took its sweet time.”

Thomas stood there in stunned silence while Sam jogged to the Uber.

“Jesus, Tom!” he called back. “I think this guy’s dead!”

END

NEXT WEEK: Short story inspired by the tweet: 'If you want me to leave you alone, say that, and I won't'.





Comments

Anonymous said…
Amazing story 🔥🔥🔥 Keep it up 🔥 I'm eager for the next one.
Anonymous said…
Captivating short story!
Anonymous said…
Crowbar was too convenient,, but story wise,,,,, good one, threw me off for sure

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